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Any chance for a gasper route or nah?

I get its on me for not assuming the main character is a man, but its pretty funny to see my first interaction with someone named Alice, right after calling my character Alice.

Heads up, "push further" when learning magic crashes the game. Maybe set up an autosave?

If you play the demo first can you continue on from the same save or do you have to restart?

You should add the nsfw tag to make this easier to find

Looks really promising. I'd reccomend the first erotic scene to be whatever your strongest with, even if its just a small one so people can get a taste for your writing.

The minimum world of all one building is the second highest, from there you can build a single tower and you'd have reached maximum capacity.
10/10

Love the game so far, the art is incredible and the conept is great. Just some constructive critisism:
I feel the "voice in your head" can take you out from the experience when its interupting conversations. Usually it's not a problem, but for a story driven visual novel it's worth playing around with. Still love the game and the writing is still great, just seems like it would be improved to take out the voice where it isn't neccesary. There are even times where it will pop up without it being immediately obvious who's talking. 
Don't want to come off as mean because I actually really enjoy all the other writing, and maybe it lessens later on, but its too glaring a problem not to mention. 5/5 otherwise